Sunday, 10 April 2016

Uri didn't know a slight difference to her could cause this trouble until the day she was told about force marriage. Living in a Syrian town, Salma, she was a kind, polite, happy-go-lucky 22 year old. The only difference was that she loved a girl and in the hope of her parents support and their permission, she told her parents about it. Far from her fanciful expectation, her mom fainted and Uri was locked up in her room.

Droplets of sweat started to fall and she tried to open the window but the lock didn't surrender. She kept on meandering her room, trying to settle everything in her mind. However, the more she thought about it, the more complicated it got. She found her pillow soaked up with her tears. She was confused, hatred grew on her parents, but mostly to herself. With growling stomach and desert like throat, she spent 3 days in her unventilated room and right before she was going to faint, her parents came into her room and told her to shower and get ready to go out.

She was so happy, thinking they're going out to meet her girlfriend, but that happiness didn't last for long. She overheard her parents talking about arranged marriage with man whom she had not met with 12 years gap between their ages is going to take place in 3 days. She was so shocked and didn't want to believe the reality since she had no idea about this. The arrangement had been made even before she was born, in exchange with money to pay for her family's loans. She was frozen there for few seconds but quickly started thinking about her plans. The first part of the plan that had to happen as soon as possible was to get out of this house and she knew that the family of the groom will definitely look for her so she needed to go to a place where they can't find her in a short period of time.

She jumped out of her window with all her savings, not giving attention to the risk, but to save her life from being stuck with someone who she doesn't want. The first place that came across her mind was the UK, as she heard that it is a very opened country. Without hesitation, she left a text message to her girlfriend, saying she's going to find a way to solve this problem and booked the earliest flight ticket available.


At the same time, in Iraq, another girl called Mia was trying hard to save her life, too. She was from a Christian family, and she was very religious as she was suffering from a disease called haemophilia. It didn't have any cure and she was devastated, but after she heard miraculous news from her neighbour that her cancer was cured after going to the church every day, and after completing the lent. It was like a stray of hope for her and she started thinking the only cure is the god.

Mia's family was spending sweet time together until a group of Muslim extremists came and kidnapped them. They were tied up and were locked in a room. When the guard went out, Mia found a piece of broken bottle on the ground. She intentionally fell with the chair and picked the life saver up. After several times of drawing the tightly tied rope, she won the victory over it. After breaking her rope, she untied other family members' as well. Luckily, the lock of the gate was very old and rusty, so they managed to break it and get out. They were relieved that they could escape, but everything changed when the guards found out that they weren’t where they’re supposed to be. They started shooting at them while Mia's family was trying to climb up the wall. 'Bang', her mother fell, ‘bang bang’, her brother fell, and it was only her and her dad who managed to climb up the wall.Just when the only thing left to do was to jump down the wall,there was another gun shot…and she saw her dad falling down, in a slow motion. She felt her heart breaking down, but she had no choice, but to run away as far as she could with her running tears.

Mia ran to her maximum and found a hole in a big tree. It was just big enough for her to hide her tiny body. Luckily, the kidnappers ran the other way to chase her, failing to spot Mia and the tree. She ran to a bank, took out all her money in her account and without any hesitation, she went straight to the airport. As she had seen a movie about a nun in UK and her dream was to be a nun, she booked for the nearest flight to the UK.

The airport was where the drama actually started: Mia and Uri met. Coincidently they sat next to each other. As it was a long trip and they had long conversations and when they found out that they were in a similar situation. Because they both didn’t have any company, they decided to stay together. Sharing similar concerns and the condition they are in right now made them like best friends. Especially for Mia, Uri was the only person who Mia could depend on as all her family members passed away.

They reached the UK safely and they were sent to the homes made for refugees. They got on a bus to go to that place, and heard a woman screaming.
 “My purse! Someone stole it!”
“Did you see the culprit?”
“No. But I think I know who did this!”
 Mia and Uri could feel all eyes were on them, when they didn't even know how her purse looked like. They insisted, but soon, the police came they were sent to the police station.          

They interrogated Mia and Uri about the incident, but they couldn't answer any question as they weren't the culprits. After few hours, they were sent back due to no evidence that represented them as criminals. After these vicissitudes, they finally reached the refugee camp and they were briefed about how to claim asylum in the UK and they thought their lives would be smooth after it without knowing what's coming for them. 
They were happy even though there were rats running around and spider webs every corner, just because they weren't in their country. But that’s when Mia could finally let her feelings out. She started sobbing, thinking about her family and feeling guilty as she was the only who escaped. A soft cry of Mia was the only sound in the dark, calm room. No one, not even Uri could comfort her. The long, lonely, sorrowful night was passing and Mia cried herself to sleep.

When the ray of bright light shone that filthy room, they got ready to go to the embassy to sign for the asylum. Mia pretended nothing had happened, but her swollen eyes could tell the story. Uri tried to ignore it and acted normally. When they got to the embassy, there was an immense line starting from the entrance reaching the next building. They spent the whole day waiting with no food and water and when it was their turn, they were told to go back since the embassy was closing. They were disappointed, but stayed positive as it was the only hope they had and they could comeback again.

Their way back felt different to what they saw in the morning. The trees were swaying leaving huge gloomy shadows, the sound of bird chirping also sounded dismal, and they could hear some footsteps chasing after them. They tried to run to a place with more people and started running. However, just when they started running, a hand pulled them. They started screaming and tried to run away from him, but was taken away to a quiet road where they couldn't even spot an ant.


As a ray of light from a car struck them, they could check the person's face, and Uri couldn't close her mouth in shock because the person was the fiance of Uri, who she ran away from. She just dropped, hoping this was just a nightmare. But sadly, it was real. Mia was confused to see Uri getting terrified by the look of a stranger, but remembered what Uri told her and tried to protect her.
Our 15th Fitness run was held on the 25th of January. It was organised by the year 11s with the theme of animals. There were obstacles representing each animal to raise awareness of the endangered animals.

The first obstacle was going through the huddles with some poachers throwing balls at the runners. This was carried out by the orang-utan group which represented how they suffer from the poachers.

The second obstacle was by the birds group, where the runners had to slide down a slippery mat. This represented the first flight of baby birds. Soap water on the mat helped them slide further.

The third obstacle was by the tigers where there was a mini jungle made. Runners had to go through the jungle with the disturbance of leaves and some pits. The runners also had to crawl to pass a net maze which represented the hunting of tigers.

All students from kindergarten to Year 11s participated in this event. Some kindergarten students didn't know the direction to run, so we had to run with them. We were laughing at how cute they were and all of them answered that they definitely enjoyed this run,

We started shooting water guns at the runners and each other which made us soaking wet, but as it was really hot, it helped us be cool and some even wanted water on them. I had to change twice because my friends kept on throwing the whole bucket of water to me. It made me freezing cold although the sun was shining brightly and others were sweating.

It was a memorable and enjoyable run. Luckily no one got injured and the event was closed successfully. Setting obstacles up and cleaning them were quite tiring and annoying, but we felt proud of ourselves and were satisfied looking at others enjoying the event.

We really look forward to the next event, sports day which will be next month and we hope it would be as exciting as the fitness run we just finished.

Saturday, 9 April 2016

School expedition report from Chew Valley School

It's formal as it doesn't contain any contractions with apostrophe. Phrases and vocabularies are quite formal and the structure is also formal. However, the writer uses a lot of adjectives and because she included herself in the report, it appears to be more friendly.



School event report from New Plymouth Boys' High school

The report is very formal as the report is about official school event. Words used are also formal with not many adjectives. Information such as the names of the winners is well organised. The structure of this report is formal too. The writer doesn't include her/himself in the report, so it makes a distance between the writer and the reader.

Monday, 4 April 2016

The meeting for organising fundraising events was held in the school hall at 3p.m. It was expected that about 20 people will attend the meeting, but there were 30 students and 20 teachers including the head master, head boy and head girl.

The meeting began with a presentation by the organiser, Mr. Kennedy, for about 10 minutes. Then people were divided into groups to discuss about their ideas for 20 minutes. After that, they had to present their ideas. This is where some troubles happened. One group called the Apples strongly disagreed with the Grapes. Their voices got louder and they were about to fight. Mr Kennedy quickly stopped them saying it is a meeting to help others, so there is no right and wrong with ideas. Apart from that incident, the discussion went well with few good ideas about fundraising like the colour run. 

I can't call this meeting a failed meeting as most parts of the meeting were quite successful but it was disappointing how two groups got into a fight when there are teachers in that group too. For the next meeting which is going to be on the next Thursday at 4pm, we should definietly make sure this kind of incident does not happen again. Hopefully the next meeting will go smoothly and fluently without any troubles.

Sunday, 3 April 2016

Interviewer: So - with just under 500 tigers still in the wild, is there anything we can do to improve this situation?

Charity manager: Of course. There is a lot we can do to help the wild tigers. First thing we should do is to identify the high priority tiger populations.

Interviewer: (interrupts) But isn't about 500 the right figure? Why do we need to identify them?

Charity manager: I'm sorry but could you let me go on with what I was saying just now? I'll answer that question later. Um...so, We need to find the exact number and provide spaces for them as we destroyed their habitat. They need 1000 square kilometres free of human activity to mate. They won't do this if they feel uncomfortable and anxious. This will cause the population and the birth rate to drop. Not only it is for the tigers, it is also safer for humans to be far away from tigers as they are wild.

Interviewer: You haven't answered my question yet. Is there any suitable place for them to stay?

Charity manager: I'm sure there are spaces in countries like India and Philippines with areas where not many people stay.

Interviewer: Is that all we can do? Are there any other ways?

Charity manager: Certainly, we can educate children and develop local community-based conservation programmes. This will stop the young people from having ideas to be poachers and they'll most likely try to love the wild animals and save them.

Interviewer: Previously, you mentioned we need to provide the tigers shelters. Is there any precautions to that?

Charity manager: Yes, we definitely need trained officers and guards to protect tigers from the poachers.

Interviewer: Wouldn't it be too dangerous?

Charity manager: That's why they need to be trained really well and they need to be splendid at self defence martial art. Their pays will be good.

Interviewer: Okay, thank you very much for your ideas and let's hope this will work out so that we can preserve the wild life.

Charity manager: Thank you for interviewing me and I hope everyone will be able to realise the importance and the seriousness of this matter.

Saturday, 2 April 2016

30th March 2016

My friend Olivia came over to have a sleepover since she lives quite far and we wanted to go to Sunway lagoon at 9am. We watched a horror movie together which I couldn't watch by myself. The background music of the movie was horrifying but overall, it wasn't really scary. We started painting our nails at 2am and ended up sleeping at about 4am, when we had to wake up by 8.30. It was tiring but was worth as I haven't met Olivia for so long.

31st March 2016

It was my birthday and my friends and I decided to go to Sunway lagoon. It has been almost a year since last time and they had new rides and new theme park which made my day even more exciting. Although my favourite ride was closed, we had so much fun. The best part of my birthday was when a lot of people wished me happy birthday. There were more than 90 people and it was quite tiring replying all of them, but I was thankful that people care about my birthday.