Saturday, 9 April 2016

School expedition report from Chew Valley School

It's formal as it doesn't contain any contractions with apostrophe. Phrases and vocabularies are quite formal and the structure is also formal. However, the writer uses a lot of adjectives and because she included herself in the report, it appears to be more friendly.



School event report from New Plymouth Boys' High school

The report is very formal as the report is about official school event. Words used are also formal with not many adjectives. Information such as the names of the winners is well organised. The structure of this report is formal too. The writer doesn't include her/himself in the report, so it makes a distance between the writer and the reader.

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